Sword Songs: Poetry From Middle Earth

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SWORD SONGS: Poetry from Middle Earth


The rhyme and rhythm of words in verse are my first love, and what started my writing adventures so many years ago. When I originally joined the Plaza in 2004, I spent all my time role-playing and never had the opportunity to share my Tolkien-inspired poetry. Now seems like a good time to rectify that omission. Enjoy!


All poetry ©2002-2024 by Morfindel/aka Elvellon Ringsbane/aka Rose Larson

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This one I wrote for the Live the Dream contest here on the Plaza...

In Dreams

Beneath the sun, under the moon,
I waking weep.
Sorrow is all this mortal world can give.
Above the moon, beyond the stars,
I sleeping wake.
The sun is rising where in Dreams, I live.

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Concerning the banner Arwen made for Aragorn...

A Sable Banner for the King

The night has laid her somber peace
Upon the hidden valley fair
Within, a maiden lies in sleep
The moon upon her raven hair.

Without, the stars like diamonds gleam
Softly they gild the weaver’s frame
Ornately carved and inlaid, yet
As fragile as thy fleeting dreams.

The midnight threads are yet unloosed
Still bound in fetters to the loom
They speak of endless labor, ceased
With the first rising of the moon.

The hands that wove thee rest at last
Lost in dreams weariness fades
While you in silence await the dawn
The summons for a last crusade.

Black as the storm that riseth swift,
Dark as the fathomless cavern rift,
Unseen device upon thee laid
By Elven hands for mortal made.

A mighty banner grim and proud
A sign of victory or a shroud
In the endless dark to fly
Fear of the mountain to defy.

Awake the shadows buried deep
The Oathbreakers their oath to keep
From cliff to sea the host to lead
Their vow to pay, from curse be freed.

Above the ship your folds to fling
Hope unto the hopeless bring
A sign of triumph in the midst
Of sorrow, by the dawn is kissed.

A new light rises from the sea
The sun at last from bondage free
Your dark ensign to all revealed
Terror and wonder on the field.

The radiant dawn gilds the spread wing
Upon your crown seven stars sing
A mithril tree unwithering
A sable banner for the king.

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That is pretty good, @Morfindel
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@Hill, thanks! Digging up old poems brings back many memories.

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One of my rare free-form verses. Eowyn speaks...

Beneath a Barren Sky

Beneath a barren sky,
A barren land,
And a barren heart to match.
A cold wind blows;
Its sighs of mourning
Sing to my heart.

The bitter days wear on,
Futile labor bringing nought
But yearnings.
The seasons vanish and return,
Another cycle of the moon…
Maybe tomorrow will bring freedom.
I know better than to hope.

The wheel spins,
Winding threads to bind me.
The needle’s sting
Mocks the sword.
The silver gleams
In the dying fire;
The knives are sharp,
To slice the flesh of swine.
When will I hone the blade?

Useless trinkets, these jewels I wear;
The circlet presses, heavy as my grief.
Long skirts, a shroud
The wool weighs of doom,
Dragging me down.
Give me a hauberk,
And a helm of steel.
They, at least, would not carry
The weight of despair.

The nights hold no repose;
Carven stone echoes
To my feverish steps.
Sleepless eyes roving,
Red in the light of the fire,
Seeking for a flaw
In the cage.

The pale dawn comes,
Another day of false pretending.
Is there no ending
To this lying dance?

In the darkness,
It seems years
Until the time of dawn.
Under the cold sun,
The night cannot come too swift.
While light remains
I must be strong.
At least the Shadow
Hides my tears.

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Morfindel: Ohhh, a new thread. Time to spam something in it. :tongue: You do give Eowyn a nice and interesting voice with the first poem. It feels if she wrote it herself. The one dedicated to Arwen's work is a nice reminder of what she did. Yeah I was also swept up in RP at the time, and began writing poetry much later though I do it for a lot of years. Thanks for sharing. I will be on the lookout for more! :winkkiss:
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Thanks Aikári! I've been writing poems since age 7, such a long time ago now...but it is still magic. More soon!

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Horns of the North, wildly blowing...Rohan had come at last!

The Coming of the Rohirrim

Darkness lies on ancient throne,
Seven circles wrought of stone,
Carven marble walls of white,
Powerless to stem the night.

Deathly crimson run the tides
Endless fear where death resides
Terror’s legions’ blackened flood
Turn the moonlit stone to blood.

Men of ancient noble race
Proud of glance and fair of face,
Led the city – now no more;
Death has found a secret door.

Stone of nightshade, gleaming black
Twisting fires swirling back
Snared the lord who dared to strive
With despair whom none survive.

By the orb the eldest forth
Went to death far in the North
Now the last remaining son
Dies for what his brother won.

Wolves of fire rage below
Gates of silver molten flow
As a beacon falling far
Blazes like a dying star.

Where are they, the Lords of Light?
Who can stem this tide of night?
Victory has passed away
Hopeless as the coming day.

Sudden, from the sable East
O’er the roar of Mordor’s feast
Clear and wild crying forth
Sound the voices of the North.

Against the murky, clouded skies
Like a dream shadows arise;
Faint among their banners run
The first shafts of the rising sun.

Banners crimson wrought with gold,
Beneath them fields of green unfold,
Horses white gilded with flame,
Emblems of an ancient name.

The night is breaking ‘ere ordained
Death finds his terror’s power stained
Victory slips from his dark grasp
Who proudly thought he held it fast.

Before his host spurs forth the King
His arms of gold bright glimmering
His steed whiter than snow by far
And swifter than a falling star.

His helm is like a burning brand
His shield a sun-shaft in his hand
His sword upraised blazes with light
As beacons kindled in the night.

Three times the Rohirrim cry out
Three times they raise their fearful shout
Then charge as, thousands with one breath,
They call upon the name of Death.

Amid the shadows sounds a horn,
Beneath their feet thunder is born
Six thousand spears gleam cold and bright
Like stars upon a moonless night.

A fell light gleams within their eyes
Their foes quail trembling at their cries
Along their line spears laid in rest
Shine like a dark wave’s foaming crest.

Stand not, foemen, to abide
The power of the coming tide;
Mordor’s might is swept away
As the Men of Rohan play.

Iron hooves shod with despair
Pound the earth, now black, once fair
Blood dissolves the ancient rust
As bright steel grinds all to dust.

Who can stand before their force?
Fell the rider, swift his horse
Lords of Rohan’s sweeping plain
Field’s of Pelennor regain.

Darkness’ forces turn and flee;
‘Make thou safe Gondor’s city!’
Glory to Theoden King
And the mighty Rohirrim.

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Beautiful poems Morfindel! You really capture the spirit of the atmosphere in your words - it feels very epic and the rhythm is strong. I particularly liked “blood dissolves the ancient rust / as bright steel grinds all to dust”. Crisp and dramatic.
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Brilliant @Morfindel I can only second the praise of Silky Goosness. Such an important turning point in the history of ME yet we don't often focus on it, your dramatic poem certainly shows us why we should. :)
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Silky Gooseness and Saranna, thank you both! The interplay of rhyme and rhythm has always driven my love and writing of poetry. And Tolkien was the master of epic, I am honored to be able to capture some of that spirit.

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A trilogy of haikus for the Steward of Gondor...

Denethor

Ecthelion’s son,
Bearer of the Steward’s rod
Until the king returns.

Noble man and proud,
Keen eyed, subtle in council,
Blinded by your sight.

Knowledge was your curse,
Despair no man could conquer
Thus you fell in flames.

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Oooh! I like. Especially: 'Blinded by your sight.'
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Hey Morfindel: You have shared two nice poems I have to say. I can't do rhyme and rhythm in English, too difficult for me. That works only in Dutch for me. The Rohrrim is a strong and lively poem. Denethor has this dark gloom over it. I like the first one better, perhaps it is much longer and more detailed. Thanks for posting! :winkkiss:
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Thanks everyone! Here is one for the King, the Lay of Gil-galad revised for Aragorn.

So sing the minstrels of Gondor…

Elessar Was A Mighty King

Elessar was a mighty king
Of him the harpers gladly sing,
He who renewed lands fair and free
Between the mountains and the sea.

His sword was long, his glance was keen,
His banner black afar was seen
The seven stars of Gondor’s shield
Were mirrored on its sable field.

Not long ago he road this way
And now he dwelleth here to stay
For out of darkness rose his star,
From Mordor, where no shadows are.

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Tolkien speaks of the sorrow of the Elves, loving the world yet having to watch it decay while they remained young. I often feel that way myself, as if I am outside time... This one is for Elrond, immortal but forced to part from his daughter because she chose a mortal life.

Elrond of Rivendell

Flowing locks of darkest hue
Hair of polished ebony;
Beaten silver, woven through
Endless knots of memory.

Stars of heaven gleaming hard
Eyes of ancient burnished steel;
Flaming sparks, a broken shard
Depth of knowledge to reveal.

Keen to sense what is not seen
Ears have caught the timeless song;
Joy glitters ‘neath sorrow’s sheen,
Echoes of the ages long.

Firm to counsel wayward men
Lips impart what age instills;
Good and evil known within,
Matchless wisdom endless spills.

White and fair yet strong and hard
Hands that grasped the singing blade;
Bound in gold, wisdom to guard
Midnight fire soon to fade.

Knows the truth yet fears the end,
Noble heart doomed to foresee.
Mortal sorrows could not bend
Her will, nor send her to the Sea.

Deathless lord of fading race
On your brow the shadow falls;
Westward slowly turns thy face,
In the wind the wide sea calls.

In Hope’s hand you lay the Star
Love and tears for night’s erase;
One last journey now afar
Starwards, to the dawn’s embrace.

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Morfindel: I can hear an echo that I feel sometimes too, an immortal into a mortal world, to be out of time. Some nice poems you have shared! Elessar is very well adapted and Elrond is a beautiful one. You know the essence to portray elves very well. *g*
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