Oh my blob, I am so behind on these!
Thank you for your feedback,
Taeth! The scene in her dream actually takes place before the scene with the baker. Taking the necklace was more an accident in the heat of the moment than purposeful theft. The chance of the necklace being there and aiding her in killing the other girl does instill in her a deep sense of the randomness of life and death, which informs her attitude toward relationships and motivates her to live in the moment. In contrast, killing the man lends her a sense of power and control against what she perceives as the chaotic indifference of chance in life, and so she chooses to capitalize on that angle of violence and theft.
Since the new scene below contributes to some timeline craziness, for clarity:
- The scene in response to advanced prompt #2 (below) happens first (she's about 12-13 at this point)
- The dream/flashback scene in response to advanced prompt #1 follows immediately
- The scene in response to basic prompt #1 happens a couple months later
- The scene in response to advanced prompt #3 (below) happens many years later (edit: have removed this bc I just remembered that we're doing 1 prompt per post - will post it later
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Character name: Zôrzimril
Track: Advanced
Prompt: #2 - What is the most truly selfless thing your character has ever done? Was it a conscious choice or an instinctual reflex? Did other people recognize it as selfless? If it happened publicly, how did it make your character feel?
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The new cog lay at anchor just outside the harbor, music and laughter rising from it into the night.
Zôrzimril detached herself from the crowd clustered in admiration around her father. It was simply too noisy. There were few other children aboard the ship, but
Zôr had not deigned to speak to them. It was her father's night and she was his proud daughter; they were not worth her while. She would rather wander alone to look out on the sea than join their games.
Noting her daughter's absence from her side,
Zôr's mother tailed her as the girl moved away from the group. The girl had walked to the bow and climbed onto the rail. Now, she was leaning dangerously over the edge, her dark curls cast forward around her face. Something unusual caught her eye.
"Mother!" Zôr called, beckoning her to the rail of the ship and pointing at the flickering flame drifting across the water.
"Look!"
While the crowd had been focused on their celebration, a tiny vessel had emerged from the harbor and drawn near. It was no ordinary ship, though: it was unmanned and aflame. Curls of smoke rose from it into the low-hanging clouds. Her mother paced nearer and took
Zôr's hand gently to pull her back from the edge. Ready to whine and plead in the joking way that usually made her mother smile,
Zôr lifted her gaze to her mother's face. She held her tongue on seeing the familiar features, the lips and fine cheekbones and grey eyes she had inherited, tinged with fear.
The girl's delight at the brightly burning craft vaporized instantly.
"What is it? Why is that boat on fire?"
Her mother's mouth dropped open, but she did not speak.
Zôr watched her features intently. Something was wrong. Her mother closed her mouth and rushed back to her father. With a glance back at the approaching blaze,
Zôr hurried after her. Now her mother had dragged her father to the rail and shown him what
Zôr had seen. He gripped the rail, white knuckled with anxiety, and shouted an order to raise the anchor. The joyous shouts turned panicky and people scattered to respond to the orders, spilling drinks and tripping over themselves and each other in their haste.
The fireship had drawn within yards of the cog, guided forward by inertia and the gentle evening wind. There was a dull, anticlimactic thud of impact and then a slow crackle as the fire licked at the ship and caught. The flames crept through the hold where, unbeknownst to those aboard, barrels of pitch used in the sealing of the cog's seams had been left surreptitiously by the builders, who had been paid well for it. The barrels caught and the pitch heated through, leaking vapors into the air that hung over the steadily growing fire.
Zôr's heart pounded. People were scrambling now toward the two little rowboats that hung in wait of emergency, and her father picked her up roughly in his haste and hoisted her into one. For some reason, neither of her parents got in. She struggled and kicked at the people crowding around her, crying out for them with fierce desperation. The crowd jostled, and an opening formed between two men who had been among the loudest singers tonight.
Zôr darted through it and back onto the deck toward her parents. She had just begun to tug at their hands to pull them onto a boat, too, when the heat from the fire and the vapors from the pitch in the hold finally embraced and exploded.
she/her | Esta tierra no es mía, soy de la nocheósfera.